Good Features:
The description was vivid and not just visual.
The author used dialogue that sounded natural.
The author's discovery was clear to readers.
The paragraphs were smoothly connected to each other so the ideas seemed
to flow.
The topic was very interesting.
Readers could easily visualize the descriptions.
The introduction made readers curious.
The title was intriguing.
The opening was good.
Readers could clearly understand the feelings of the people in the
essay.
The author used flashback.
Problems:
The conclusion didn't fit the essay well.
The title was not suitable.
The connection between the introduction and the body of the essay was
not smooth.
There was not enough background information for the readers.
Readers had important unanswered questions about the events or people
in the essay.